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Update on Life

Sun Aug 2, 2009, 7:19 PM
you may have noticed that I just uploaded about 6 or 7 photos earlier this evening (if you commented or faved I'll get to those tommorow). Basically it's all i've done Photo wise in the last three weeks since I started workin' on Chronicles of Delain Book 1.

As far as the novel goes- I've hit a decent stride again. i needed to take a few days to regroup my thoughts on what I wanted and where I was leading. I also needed to take some time to really understand where Emma was coming from. Why in my head she was making these decisions but they were against my originally conceived notions of who she was. I feel I've taken the proper route and cross examined her and have come to some rather interesting conclusion. I'll give you a little bit of that now:

The actual title of the book will be 'The Deathcharmer' (more on that later)

--If you talked to me on AIM, MSN, or in person you know I ideas was for her to be around 7 or 8 years old. She is now 10 years old. I've noticed she thinks and talks in a manner that really wasn't in a way single digit kids really talked (at least the ones around where I live). I also wasn't fully satisfied with how the character had no real abilities. I mean, yeah, she was smart and stuff but overall there really wasn't anything very special about her- nothing that set her apart from any other man woman or child in the story. So the girl is now what I am calling a Deathcharmer. think SnakeCharmer but with corpses.

--I've gone back and reworked my original outlines. The basic plot points I set out in the begining are all still intact, i've just added a bit more events in chapter 1 and chapters two and three have basically been doubled. The previews I gave you last week of Chapter 2 have either been scrapped entirely or rw-written to accomadate this awesome character (a character so awesome that he doesn't even have a name yet!) I made. Basically I realized chapter 2 wasn't going anywhere because nothing was really giving the character much focus tog et through anything- so me, the writer, had no real purpose to get through it. By adding basically adding a Lord of Death wandering through that cemetery it gave the chapter some much needed electicity to jump start it.

-- As a few of you know I have plans on at least one direct sequel featuring Emma. Now I've figured the plot far enough down the line to bring out two sequels. the titles of the two books with her and one other Delain book feauring a different lead character.
Book 1: The Deathcharmer
book 2: The Color of Mist
Book 3: The Darkness of Denil
Book 4: The Mark of Redvine

--the whole first novel is outlined. the first 3 chapters of the second are also outlined. The third book has been more or less outlined for the last 3 years (long story)

-- I've written the first two chapters of Deathcharmer as well as the last two chapters. in a short thing- i actually kinda got choked up writing the last couple scenes. never did that with any of my own work before.

--can you tell I'm psyched about this?

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:iconbroken-fairy-tale:
sounds good!! and i can tell your very psyched about it :giggle:

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:iconsilently-beyond-hope:
I kind of liked the fact that there was nothing really special about her...the fact that it could happen to anyone kind of made it more relateable and special in it's own way, but I trust your judgement. I'm glad you're psyched, can't wait to see what you come up with :)

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Take your peanuts and your popcorn too, but leave me my sanity, my soul, and my heart that I may live to entertain another....
:icongh0stm1ck:
it's more she's perfectly normal when she's in Rose Falls. She's able to wield her powers more when she's in Delain because that's where the power is drawn from. I have a couple things kind of noted on the sides where she realizes she may have seen the dead among the living- but since it was an everyday thing for her she never realized or paid it much notice. it won't even dawn on her till she well on her adventure that she had seen the ghosts in her home town.

I'm not trying to give a sex change to the boy from the sixth sense- Emma will, for all intents and purposes, be a normal average little girl as this starts. She won't be some weird wallflower who pays her freinds to be her friends.

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"There's always something worth living for, Martha."
-Dr. Who

"Coffee: the finest organic suspension ever devised...I beat the Borg with it." - Captain Janeway
:icongh0stm1ck:
GO ME AND BEING PSYCHED! YEAAH!!!!!!

oh, question- outside of Faeries, Leprechauns, Banshees, and Sealwomen- what kind of creatures from your country could I put in here to people the background.

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"There's always something worth living for, Martha."
-Dr. Who

"Coffee: the finest organic suspension ever devised...I beat the Borg with it." - Captain Janeway
:iconbroken-fairy-tale:
emm, leprechauns are fairly bullshit. a lot of people get offended by this kinda of sterotype shite :S so better leave that kind of stuff out. they always get the legends wrong anyway. :laughing:
I myself am scared shitless of the banshee, along with a few others i know.
the tuatha da Daan (cant spell it XD ) thats fairly intresting stuff.

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:icongh0stm1ck:
what i'm actually doing isn't outright putting in leprechauns but I'm trying to combine different types of say 'little people' from the different cultures (not just Ireland). In the revamped chapter 2 I have Emma crashing in the house of a character that's basically the Grim Reaper of this world. I'm including aspects of a french version, the Mayan, some western world stuff and, of course, Judaio-Christian/ Muslim.

or Like my werewolves that will appear in the end- I'm drawing them from alot of east asian tales and some old german stuff as well as American Indian tales about 'wolf' tribes. It won't be the 'full moon' shit like we're used to seeing. There won't be any roles for the 'Underworld' crew and Jacob Black isn't going to have any kind of cameo.

actually I'm pretty jazzed about the werewolf scene i've got plotted. It's really the only time I've actually written about werewolves despite them being my favorite monster as a kid.

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"There's always something worth living for, Martha."
-Dr. Who

"Coffee: the finest organic suspension ever devised...I beat the Borg with it." - Captain Janeway
:iconbroken-fairy-tale:
oooh ya know what you should put in!!!
the Púca!! their really cool!!!!

btw, i love werewolves too &&

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:icongh0stm1ck:
i've added it to the list of possibilities. Not sure as to what capacity i'll use it though.

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"There's always something worth living for, Martha."
-Dr. Who

"Coffee: the finest organic suspension ever devised...I beat the Borg with it." - Captain Janeway
:iconbroken-fairy-tale:
ooh i love the Púcas!!!
but u shud defo put banshees into it... a vast majority of peeps over here are just plain terrified by them.
like the one thats rumoured to haunt kellys lane (a long lane between several fields down the road where i live)
there are a bunch of stories surrounding that lane... :giggle:

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